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Friday 28 July 2017

Poem - Mistakes

Poem - Jazire, Mistakes
WALT - write creatively on the topic from personal experiences
SUCCESS CRITERIA -
I must write my poem independently
I must reread and edit my work
I must use the correct punctuation and grammar
Poem:
We all make those small mistakes
We have those little accidents
Something either falls or breaks
But that’s not what the problem is
The problem is without mistakes
We wouldn’t learn about new things
We wouldn’t know how long it takes
To learn about what life can bring
That’s why mistakes are important
We can learn from them straight away
And then when we make another
We will know just what to say
It’s okay to make mistakes
We’ll only get better anyway
It doesn’t matter how long it takes
We will always find a way
Mistakes are made
But it’s okay
Because we all know what to say
It’s okay to make mistakes
We’ll only get better anyway
It doesn’t matter how long it takes
We will always find a way

We wrote a poem on mistakes for writing. Above is my poem. I am happy with the way I wrote it. This poem talked about making mistakes which is okay to do so, because we all will eventually learn from them anyway.

1 comments:

Unknown said...

Hey Jazire
I really enjoyed reading your Poem about mistakes.Not everyone is perfect.
How did you find making the poem, was it easy or did it take time?

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