Poem - Jazire, Mistakes
WALT - write creatively on the topic from personal experiences
SUCCESS CRITERIA -
I must write my poem independently
I must reread and edit my work
I must use the correct punctuation and grammar
Poem:
We all make those small mistakes 
We have those little accidents 
Something either falls or breaks 
But that’s not what the problem is 
The problem is without mistakes 
We wouldn’t learn about new things 
We wouldn’t know how long it takes 
To learn about what life can bring 
That’s why mistakes are important 
We can learn from them straight away 
And then when we make another 
We will know just what to say 
It’s okay to make mistakes 
We’ll only get better anyway 
It doesn’t matter how long it takes 
We will always find a way 
Mistakes are made 
But it’s okay 
Because we all know what to say 
It’s okay to make mistakes 
We’ll only get better anyway 
It doesn’t matter how long it takes 
We will always find a way 
We wrote a poem on mistakes for writing. Above is my poem. I am happy with the way I wrote it. This poem talked about making mistakes which is okay to do so, because we all will eventually learn from them anyway.
 
1 comments:
Hey Jazire
I really enjoyed reading your Poem about mistakes.Not everyone is perfect.
How did you find making the poem, was it easy or did it take time?
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