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Tuesday 17 June 2014

Tane's diary

Tane’s diary

Day 1. One  morning when i awoke from bed i jumped up and went to the bathroom to take a shower and brush my teeth.

Next i got dressed in my  clothes and shoes.

Then i went outside to tell my friends that i was going on a trip and i was  leaving Hawaii. A little while before i was leaving Hawaii some of my friends Levi and Harmony had asked me if they could come with me and i said yes so away we went, Levi, Harmony and i.

Before we were off we had to pack some food, clothes and spares just in case anything happens and if we run out of food or if we are wanting to change our clothes.

Then when we were all ready we went in a waka.
Poupe d'un waka néo-zélandais
Then we were off.


Day 5. It was a long trip until we got to Samoa.
When we got onto land we were travelling around the island and suddenly we were surrounded by other travellers. They trapped us in a cage and we begged them to let us out. After a day in the cage they promised to let us out and they gave us supplies to help us survive.
We thanked them before we left and then we were off for another journey.

We were singing waiatas along the way and we used some supplies to help us catch some kahawai. We used a fishing rod.

Then we got across the sea and took a rest.

Day 7.When we awoke we were ready for another adventure.
We travelled until we got to Cook island and stopped on land to take another look around.


There we met another traveller looking for food and shelter.
Harmony asked me if we could help the traveller.
I said yes so we invited the traveller into a hut we made and it had four rooms.
We decorated them so they could look nice.

Then we settled in and lied down on our beds to go to sleep and then another journey was completed.


Day 12. a few days later we were bright and early awaken by the sound of Melony’s singing and took a shower one by one.

Then we brushed and flossed our teeth and then  we got dressed and went off for another adventure.

We travelled far and finally we reached New Zealand.

We took a look around the parks and sat on the seats that were there and also went for a look around the houses.

Another person showed us a house we could stay in for a while named Trevor came along with us.
Trevor said he wanted to name our group Golden kids but I just wanted it to be how it was without a name but just the five of us friends together.
Luckily there were five rooms.
Levi said that our group keeps getting bigger and bigger and i said that it was because we meet the people from travelling in different countries and islands.’

The Trevor was really excited because we were the first friends he ever had.

Harmony was laughing because trevor slipped in a puddle.



The story might end here but there is more than this a fight begins between Trevor and Harmony.
I stop them as fast as possible and they calm down in an instant.
Phew that was a relief Melony and Levi said trying to sleep but there eyes kept opening and closing.

We must go on said Trevor after a few nights.
I agreed with what he said and we were off but this time it wasn’t a journey nor was it an adventure.
It was a mission.
It took a lot of days until we got all the way back to Hawaii.
Day 20. After all those trips my other friends Angel, Hatu, Haria, Jody and savana congratulated Melony and Trevor for being brave enough to help us on the way and they gave us all medals for being brave to travel a long way.


That Is The End Of My Diary.Celebratory Medals



3 comments:

Unknown said...

Hi Jazire
You did a awesome story on Tanes diary and the picture is really cool. Keep it up. Did you have fun writing the story.

Unknown said...

Hi Jazire

I did have fun writing it. Im looking forward to your next story.

Unknown said...

Im already excited.

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