We are learning how to - Write a paragraph

Room 7 - Cheeseburger paragraph

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Room 7 is a very productive class. Room 7, a class in Glen Innes School, has just started to get creative. Just recently, the class has been doing loads of art. In this classroom, you will find colourful things everywhere, from colours and pictures to words and work. There are a lot of students in Room 7 who like to bring their own colourful things. Even their bags are entertaining. I guess you could say that this class is very imaginative, because they are always doing things that make their room better and innovative. Now when you walk into this classroom, you will see that there are all sorts of things you can do to make something beautiful.

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KEY

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Topic  sentence         - Tomato

Detailed  sentences  - Cheese

Concluding sentence - Lettuce

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We were learning how to write a cheeseburger paragraph. Here is mine, it is about Room 7 @ Glen Innes School.