Jazire, persuasive writing

Today we did persuasive writing about kiwifruit...
This is what I wrote

These are the persuasive words I wrote to make people buy kiwifruit.

I guarantee that you will be astonished at how tasty this fruit is.

When you eat a kiwifruit, you will be impressed by it’s juiciness.

This kind of fruit is a sensation and it helps you get more powerful by the minute.
In every bite you take, a stronger person you will make.